Rooted in sales tactics, copywriting frameworks can be a huge help... sometimes.
I get asked about copywriting frameworks from time to time – usually by people who have heard or read about copywriting frameworks and think, "I want one!"
If I was being unkind, I'd say they're most often mentioned by people who like to know that they're using a freelance copywriter who is applying a process to their work – rather than plucking words from the air at random (because, duh! That's all we do).
One method when writing copy that copywriters use quite often is known as PAS – it stands for Problem, Agitate, Solution. So, in simple terms, it might be something like the following, which is written with a hypnotherapy business in mind:
Problem: 'Hi – you have something wrong in your life and it's holding you back.'
Agitate: 'I get it, it must be really difficult and is probably making you really stressed.'
Solution: 'This is a proven way to help with this problem.'
You would, of course, flesh it out somewhat.
Fascinating AIDA
Another copywriting framework is called AIDA – this one stands for Attention, Interest, Desire, Action. So:
Attention: 'Is your life being held back by stress? It's horrible, isn't it – but it can often be fixed in just an hour.'
Interest: 'It's true – thousands of people just like you who were crippled by stress have been able to return to normal, happy lives.'
Desire: 'Imagine what that would feel like! Wouldn't life be great again?'
Action: 'Well, this can become your reality if you get in touch today.'
There are loads of these frameworks, such as BAB – Before, After, Bridge. Here's how it works:
Before: 'I know what you're going through right now – horrible, isn't it?'
After: 'What if there was an answer – a way to feel normal again and start enjoying life?'
Bridge: 'I can help you get there.'
There's an inherent problem with frameworks – they're pretty salesy. It's best to humanise thing a little, especially on a homepage, perhaps even generating the idea that, 'Hey – we can fix this together'.
Perhaps more important than using a framework is taking the time to think about how to sell what you do in an appealing way. Paint a picture of the benefits of using your service.
You want to show people what life will be like after working with/buying from you.
Of course, this is all very achievable if you are a therapist – less so if you sell pencils. Although an artfully-written, persuasive bit of copy can probably turn a run of the mill 2B into something Shakespeare would covet.
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Written by Mike Peake, UK freelance copywriter and website content writer.
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